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The anger swells like inflated limbs
tossed in the shuffle of animalistic
dancing; we march to the rhythm of
our guerrilla tactics; move from the bedroom
to the kitchen before he hears;
speak absently, while whispering
'cause he might be listening.


We are mad; our blood runs thick
through our veins... we bleed
the same way. We're flesh and blood,
fresh or coagulated... it's still red and as
thick as our accent filtering
through our poetic musings
when we recite and scream
rhymes we recycle.
©2009-2010 *Konjuku
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Yes, I'm darn mad

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i don't get anger from this. more vicious and ferocious screaming in futile rage. so i guess you were successful.
i love this <33 i really do. i think it's because of the relevance to blood, which hapens to fascinate me <3


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I like the last stanza, although I don't really classify myself as a poet. XD Either way, it's beautiful.

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I think the bloody bit was uncalled for, really. Anger is much more easily described with a more biological or psychological approach. (blood as clouding vision, headache-sensations etc.) Blood is much more a symptom of tragedy and horror than it is of anger.

Then again, I can be horribly wrong (it's happened before) so don't go by my opinion alone.

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The blood thing is an allusion to the genes =p

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